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Postby Wolfie » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:37 am

w00t, finnaly done with the piccy..

bah on the paper the thighs were a bit to thick and the right arm was out of proportion so i had to fix it up a bit... i think it still looks a bit weird but anyways..

gimme some crits.
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Postby Rapscallion » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:38 am

looks great! :) what is it? :|
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Postby Roadkill » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:38 am

wow, she's strong on the left side!

kinda reminds me of a human motie, without the extra arm.
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Postby Rapscallion » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:40 am

i think that's her sleeve. what's a motie?
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Postby Roadkill » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:41 am

no, the sleeve would drape down, follow gravity. It's full of something. Padding? what about the boot?

and a motie is a creature you have to read larry niven/jerry pournelle's The Mote in God's Eye to understand. ask draco
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Postby Rapscallion » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:43 am

Draco! what's a motie?
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Postby Wolfie » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:48 am

exactly, it's funkified XD :oops:
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Postby Rapscallion » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:49 am

it looks fine. :)
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Postby Roadkill » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:51 am

however, i can sorta trace an outline behind the sleeve, and make it look like her elbow's bent, to hide the extra stuff on the right of her left sleeve, and then cut down on that little triangle of cloth, it'll look cool
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Postby Roadkill » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:51 am

and put blood around teh ankle to explain the swelling :D
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Postby Rapscallion » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:51 am

can u do that with watercolors? :|
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Postby Roadkill » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:53 am

with photoshop?
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Postby Rapscallion » Wed Aug 25, 2004 1:54 am

oh...
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Postby ChatOmbre » Wed Aug 25, 2004 2:23 am

I like it!! all the crits I would give have already been said, so I'll just add this... one of the things I liked a lot about it was that she's short and not uber skinny unlike many girls that people draw a lot. :thumbs:
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Postby Rapscallion » Wed Aug 25, 2004 2:25 am

i hate dating super skinny girls. they eat 2 little.
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