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It's Haiku Time, Everybody!

Postby Real_Pochacco » Fri Apr 23, 2004 2:19 am

Haiku is my "thang." I still don't know very much about it, but I try. Practice makes perfect.

bitter smell wafts from road
distant rumble, sky darkens
rain is coming soon

If you know much about haiku, would you give me some pointers? I want to get better, damnat.

I want a book of haiku.
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Postby Wolfie » Fri Apr 23, 2004 2:24 am

YAY! YOUR IN TO SOMTHING COOL! W00T! hehe its very nice but im not to good at haikus
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Postby Neerowolf » Fri Apr 23, 2004 3:11 am

The wind engulfs me
Sweeping away my troubles
Serenely drifts on.

Not bad for 30 seconds, eh?
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Postby Evlfrost » Fri Apr 23, 2004 3:27 am

Lo, this reminds me,
of a contest that we had.
A complete failure.

And Neero, that is not technically a haiku.

Needs to be in 5,7,5 or 3,5,3
Evljsh: You're young and thus illegal!
xXOkashiiSuruXx: -falls over-

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Postby ChatOmbre » Fri Apr 23, 2004 3:30 am

I found somewhere on lj a thing that a person wrote about haiku. it was ineresting... I'll see if I can find it again sometime.
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Postby Real_Pochacco » Fri Apr 23, 2004 4:13 am

Wolfie wrote:YAY! YOUR IN TO SOMTHING COOL! W00T! hehe its very nice but im not to good at haikus


Oh yeah, because everything else I'm into isn't cool. :p :lila
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Postby Evlfrost » Fri Apr 23, 2004 4:28 am

Heres a haiku Giga made based on my opinion haikus:

I don't like Haikus
They really are pitiful
I had to add 'Lo
Evljsh: You're young and thus illegal!
xXOkashiiSuruXx: -falls over-

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Postby Wolfie » Fri Apr 23, 2004 4:42 am

Real_Pochacco wrote:
Wolfie wrote:YAY! YOUR IN TO SOMTHING COOL! W00T! hehe its very nice but im not to good at haikus


Oh yeah, because everything else I'm into isn't cool. :p :lila


hehe, naw you like lotsa cool stuff i was jus pullin yr leg.. no really *yank yank* come back down here :p
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Postby Nuxius » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:27 am

Lo, this reminds me,
of a contest that we had.
A complete failure.
Heh, yeah, I remember that.
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Postby Wolfie » Fri Apr 23, 2004 6:04 am

*laughs at evl and his haiku* funny..
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Postby Real_Pochacco » Thu Jun 24, 2004 12:36 am

*turns on music* *goes into creative mode*

Ok, I'm going to try for another (more) haiku (s).

*idea* You know, I'm taking a psychology class, so...

swiftly moving charge
brain interprets, hormones spew
gentle caresses

That'll do pig. That'll do.

:8

What about chaos theory?

butterfly flaps wings
across ocean, storm is brewing
all is connected

Kewl. I'm on a roll.

What about crickets? They have cool sounds. Kinda miss their droning sound. Ebeh. Kinda forgot what they sound like. Need a good metaphor. Scew it. *fucking self-editor*
I'm gonna go play Diablo II some more. :|
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