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Truthfully, how good?

1
0
No votes
2
0
No votes
3
0
No votes
4
0
No votes
5
0
No votes
6
0
No votes
7
1
25%
8
1
25%
9
0
No votes
10
2
50%
 
Total votes : 4

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Postby Neerowolf » Sat Mar 20, 2004 5:15 am

I called last night with a problem
I was drunk and I was crying
The answering machine said "I'm sorry,
I'm not here but thanks for trying..."

Well that picture of you is on my bed
It seems so black and white
Its wrinkled, and salty from wasted tears,
Even though everythings alright.

Wasn't I the one who held you
when the sky fell down.
I used my body as a shield
There was no one else around.

I'm tired, of not being recognized
I'm dry from all the tears that I cried
And you finally left my useless side
At least I could say that I only tried.

I can't say that its fair
I do not even care
It was a waste of breath
Its all nothing now
I cannot figure how
But I'm waiting for death.

Wasn't I the one who held you
when the sky fell down.
I used my body as a shield
There was no one else around.

This maybe is a test
But now I must confess
I don't think that I passed
And if you come to me
Because you're lost again
I will say "kiss my ass"

Well that picture of you is on my bed
It seems so black and white
Except theres a single drop of red
From the tragedy last night...
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Postby ChatOmbre » Sat Mar 20, 2004 2:45 pm

that's beautiful...
on the poll, what are one and ten? and is five average, or is it not good?
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Postby Neerowolf » Sat Mar 20, 2004 5:14 pm

One is worst, and 10 is best. 5 is average.
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Postby chaotic century » Sun Mar 21, 2004 9:43 pm

thats AWESOME! i give it a perfect 10!
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