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Yeah, i think this is my last one for a while

Postby Rao » Mon Mar 15, 2004 4:15 am

You say that I treat you like a book on a shelf.
I don't take you out that often because I now that I completed you
and that is why you are here.
That is the reason why you stay here.
How awful you must feel.

You said you would be my dream.
I could have you every night
and if, by morning, I had forgotten you, well, no big deal,
it would be all right because you are the reoccurring kind.
You are the reoccurring kind. You never leave my mind.

Are you the love of my lifetime?
Because there have been times I have had my doubts.
We were just kids when I first kissed you in the attic of my parents house, and I wish we were there now.
It took so long to figure out what this book has been about.

Now I write when I'm away letters that you never read.
You said go to explore those other women,
the geography of their bodies
but there is just one map you'll need. You are a boomerang. You see.
You will return to me.

You will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will.

Because if you don't, then this book is all lies.
If you don't, then my plans would be all ruined.
If you don't, I'll start drinking like the way I drank before.
And I just wont have a future anymore.
Tell the Spartans, Stranger passing by,
That here, Obedient to their laws, We lie,
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Postby ChatOmbre » Mon Mar 15, 2004 4:21 am

prettiful. :)
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Postby chaotic century » Wed Mar 24, 2004 9:46 pm

*has nothing to say*
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Postby Kaos » Thu Mar 25, 2004 7:33 pm

it's nice :)

what was your band's name again?
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Postby Tar-Herunole » Thu Mar 25, 2004 10:24 pm

new or old song? or even more precisely, new or old experience that inspire it?
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Postby Rao » Mon Mar 29, 2004 12:40 am

The name of my band is A Dead Poet. As soon as I can get find a way to make a website and pay for it, i will make one.

It is a life experience, Herunole, It is the fact that i have often fell in love, but mostly it was always pleasure for the other and not passion as it was for me. I would stand by idlely just long enough to be only heartbroken again.
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Postby Tar-Herunole » Mon Mar 29, 2004 11:42 am

I once swore to give my life for one girl.
I swored i would give my life for her love.
And sometimes I am afraid I did,
for things did not work out
and nuptial promesses were broken,
and the world was broken,
and my heart was broken.
But my heart was rebuilt,
and the world was rebuilt,
But it was not the same world
and it was not the same heart.
And in this new world
and in this new heart
passion is gone
and it is only a mirage
but some nights I look
to the one I love
with my heart full of care
with my heart void of passion
and I wonder if passion was always a mirage
and I wonder if that mirage will come to me again
if I lost passion, or if passion was never there
only my wish to be a hero,
my hope of trascending this world of numbers.
And I wonder if passion awaits me, but first I need to go again to the dessert, where mirages appear
and what would be of the one I love.
And do I love her?
Do I love the one I seem to love?
Do I love the one I used to love?
What happens when the time is space and the space is time?
What happens with love?
Can you love two persons forever?
Did you ever love forever....
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Postby Murphy » Tue Mar 30, 2004 9:15 am

wow.. where did that come from? :) nice herunole (im bad at commenting stuff like this, sorry)
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Postby Tar-Herunole » Tue Mar 30, 2004 9:58 am

Well, just wrote my thoughts in an unconventional manner. Not worth of be considered a poem in itself. But definitely is what I feel (or I felt yesterday after reading Rao's reply)
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Postby chaotic century » Wed Mar 31, 2004 9:23 pm

lol i do that to when im broed but dude that was awesome man i realy liked it alot! lol everyone has a way with words but me lol
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Postby Tar-Herunole » Wed Mar 31, 2004 11:13 pm

Hey CC, it takes effort and dedication. If you read a lot and make every time and effort touse the appropiate word, it ends up coming naturally.... But it is as well a matter of experience. Once you have heard people expressing their feelings, you can see if yours do mirror in them, and then you know what of what you feel is special to you, and by hearing the other people choice of words, you start to know what is yours.
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Postby Rao » Wed Apr 21, 2004 10:56 pm

That is what a song or peom should be, you cant write a song in two days, your thoughts dont stretch that far, 2 mins, 5 mins 10 mins 20 mins, its shouldnt take one longer than 20 mins to write a good song or poem, all those bad peoms and songs you hear are ones where people sit down and take 5 hours to write..
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Postby chaotic century » Thu Apr 22, 2004 4:12 pm

lol yes i wil scribble thigns down every now n then but its never that good ive had a few i liked but nothing ive ever done could compare with what rao or u have done. lol but thanx for the advice ill b sure to do that.
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