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Ama(for my new girlfriend who i call a vampire)

Postby Rao » Wed Mar 10, 2004 11:55 pm

Ama appeared like an angel
Ama fell like rain
into my lap like a heart attack
like lightning from her name
im running dry of bad excuses
don't wanna lie or seem intrusive
but time hasn't told me anything
and neither has she

a pointsettia in poison rain
traded true love for insult and injury
we washed it down the drain
with one silver bullet and two vicodin

Ama woke up in darkness
suitcase already packed
note on the bedstand signed in blood
'sincerely never coming back'
a nightmare on my street the day she arrived
a nightmarish household in which she died
cause it made her feel at home
somehow made me feel at home

a pointsettia in poison rain
traded true love for insult and injury
we washed it down the drain
with one wooden stake to the heart and two vicodin

a pointsettia in posion rain
traded true love for insult and injury
we washed it down the drain
with one silver bullet and two vicodin
we watched the sun fall crown
on a city that sleeps in a world upside down
a slow ticket straight out of town
you went out with a bang when you took
with you all my dreams underground
with you all my dreams underground
with you all my dreams underground
with you all my dreams underground
Tell the Spartans, Stranger passing by,
That here, Obedient to their laws, We lie,
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Postby Wolfie » Thu Mar 11, 2004 3:44 am

why do ya call her a vamp O.o anyways cool
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Postby ChatOmbre » Thu Mar 11, 2004 5:05 am

that's beautiful. :)
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Postby Rao » Thu Mar 11, 2004 11:12 pm

Becuz she always tired at school and later on after work when we are togethe when she should be tired, she isnt. It is really weird. So i call her my vampire.
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Postby Kaos » Thu Mar 11, 2004 11:17 pm

i like it. the fact that she reminds you of a vampy is coolness. don't konw why. it is tho =D sweet poem. i like it. you're great with putting words together to make meaning ;-;

indeeed, nicely written :cookie²
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Postby chaotic century » Sat Mar 13, 2004 8:18 pm

i agree its great.a bit confusing but im always confused.
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Postby Murphy » Mon Mar 15, 2004 9:50 am

as always RAO, awesome! ^^
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Postby SuicidalButterfly » Sat Mar 20, 2004 12:46 am

Wow...this is like a total contrast to that one thread in the ToB. Two words: absolutely astounding.
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Postby Rao » Wed Mar 24, 2004 4:26 am

What do you mean contrast?
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