My drive last night

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My drive last night

Postby Rao » Fri Feb 06, 2004 1:37 am

You follow the footsteps echoes leading down a hall
to a room There is music playing tiny bells with moving parts.
Here the shadows make things ugly,
an effect quite undesirable
The bold and yellow daylight grows like ivy across the wall

and bounces off of the painted porcelain,
tiny dancing doll
Her body spins, as she pirouettes again,
the world suddenly seems small.

On an off white, subtle morning
you stretch your legs in the front seat
The road has made a vacuum where our voices used to be
And you lay your head onto my shoulder,
pour like water over me.

So if I just exist for the next ten minutes of this drive
that would be fine
And all the trees that line this curb
would be rejoicing and alive.

Soon all the joy that pours from everything
makes fountains of your eyes
because you finally understand
the movement of a hand waving you good-bye.
Tell the Spartans, Stranger passing by,
That here, Obedient to their laws, We lie,
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Postby chaotic century » Fri Feb 06, 2004 1:44 am

another good one
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"this world is made of! this world is made of.. LOVE and PEACE!

neero is my master

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Postby Rao » Fri Feb 06, 2004 2:07 am

This, musically and lyrically is my masterpiece, but you need to hear it with music and my voice. I just recorded this one today, and put the piano, hammer dulcimer and bass guitar on it today, and i love this song.
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Postby Wolfie » Fri Feb 06, 2004 3:18 am

i love it to its quite wonderful, i would love to hear it, if you ask drazo im sure he can help with posting it
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Postby ChatOmbre » Fri Feb 06, 2004 4:36 am

wow... another lovely song... and this one is even more wonderful than your others that I've read. I would very much like to hear it. :ja
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Postby Murphy » Fri Feb 06, 2004 10:15 am

another one that very beautiful ^^ yes get them posted! =)
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Postby Drazo » Sat Feb 07, 2004 1:10 pm

Wolfie wrote:i love it to its quite wonderful, i would love to hear it, if you ask drazo im sure he can help with posting it


yes. I lke to hear it too :)
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Postby Rao » Mon Feb 09, 2004 1:42 pm

We just finished this song today, It sounds really awesome!!!
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Postby Murphy » Mon Feb 09, 2004 1:58 pm

i wanna hear it! the lyrics is awsome ^^
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Postby Wolfie » Mon Feb 09, 2004 3:56 pm

Gimme gimme i wanna hear!
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Postby Tar-Herunole » Mon Feb 09, 2004 4:04 pm

Cmon Rao, choose one of your songs and post it for all of us!
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Postby Rao » Tue Feb 10, 2004 12:32 am

I dont know how to put them on the computer!!!! :(
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Postby ChatOmbre » Tue Feb 10, 2004 1:04 am

what do you have them on right now?
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Postby Wolfie » Tue Feb 10, 2004 2:25 am

a: have a microphone
b: record them to yr comp
c: i have no frickin clue maybe add attachment...
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Postby Rao » Tue Feb 10, 2004 3:28 am

They are recorded and on a cd!!! I just have to get them on. I know how now, but i have to wait til i get my computer back from my dad :(
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