My damned angel

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My damned angel

Postby Neerowolf » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:53 pm

Once I was a fool and I fell for you
And I cannot believe
how you mistreated me
Used and abused, I lay shattered like glass on the floor
And now I can finally see

You were never right
Stay outta my sight
I don't want to know just who you are
You played with my heart
Lied right from the start
My damned angel

Make up your mind
I don't have the time
To listen to your lies
tonight...
All you did was deceive
Now I want you to leave
You're not worthy of me
good night

I cannot fight the pain
It stings
A wound that will not heal
I'm going insane
All these things seem mundane
But you know that I can feel

My damned angel
I love you
I hate you
I love you
I hate you
I hate you
I hate you
I love you...

Why must you pull the strings
The marionette of love
It falls limp at your command
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Postby Kaos » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:55 pm

eeep, i'm fond of the "i love you i hate you" part. it enhances the feelings you're portraying. it's great. sweetness indeed..
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Postby Wolfie » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:56 pm

O_O it rocked :))) that was wonderful neero :))))
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Postby ChatOmbre » Thu Feb 05, 2004 12:00 am

*claps* beautiful
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Postby SuicidalButterfly » Thu Feb 05, 2004 12:30 am

I'm wondering if this is about someone in particular....hmmm...nice little thing there though.
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Postby Murphy » Fri Feb 06, 2004 9:57 am

NICE NEERO! ure relly good with words too! i like it ^^
its beautilful =)
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Postby Tar-Herunole » Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:04 am

Difficult feelings ah!
It's good you expressed them..so nicely
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Postby chaotic century » Fri Feb 06, 2004 6:22 pm

lol yes that was good. tho the i love u i hate u part sounds like a part of a song by saliva i forgot the name n it also reminded me of another song by 3 days grace i hate everything bout u hehe
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