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Postby Rao » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:49 pm

Here is a scale. Weigh it out and you will find, easily,
more than sufficient doubt that these colors you see
were picked in advance
by some careful hand with an absolute concept of beauty.

They are smeared and these blurs come in random order
to color the eyes of your former lovers.
Hers were green like July except
when she cried they were red.

Now I know a disease that these Doctors cant treat.
You contract it the day you accept all you see
is a mirror and a mirror is all it can be.
A reflection of something we're missing.

And language just happened, it was never planned,
and its inadequate to describe where I am
in the room of my house where the light has never been
waiting for this day to end.

And these clocks keep unwinding and completely ignore
everything that we hate or adore.
Once the page of a calendar is turned its no more.
So tell me then, what was it for?
Oh tell me, what was it for?
Tell the Spartans, Stranger passing by,
That here, Obedient to their laws, We lie,
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Postby Wolfie » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:51 pm

hmmm, i like it :)
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Postby Neerowolf » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:56 pm

You're a hell of alot better than me...
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Postby ChatOmbre » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:56 pm

*hugs Rao* I like it too. especially the parts about colors and eyes.
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Postby Kaos » Wed Feb 04, 2004 11:59 pm

i agree with wolfie. i like it too. it's great :)

They are smeared and these blurs come in random order
to color the eyes of your former lovers.
Hers were green like July except
when she cried they were red.

especially that. i like it..

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Postby TerraFrost » Thu Feb 05, 2004 2:42 am

i like this one the best of the ones you posted - esp. the part about the disease the doctors can't treat (which i've never actually experienced, myself, thankfully), and language...
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Postby Murphy » Fri Feb 06, 2004 10:00 am

just BEAUTIFUL! its very good Rao !
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Postby Tar-Herunole » Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:14 am

Yeas.. it's really good... and the way time is imbeddedthe choice of past or presnt that's good
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