Depressing break-up poetry!

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Depressing break-up poetry!

Postby WaterNymph » Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:09 am

As I clasp your hand
Dragging you back,
Pleading for you each time
To take me back.

You tear away,
And rub away my touch,
Tears form in my eyes,
As a last resort.

I grab for you again,
And you push me away,
Glaring at my inner child,
To young for your mind.

Needing somebody to hug,
A living teddy bear,
To care each day,
Without reminder.

As you leave my side,
Always and forever,
My eyes follow you,
Never forgiving.

One last contact,
A blink of an eye,
Your train leaves the station,
And me behind.
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Postby Neerowolf » Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:10 am

*cries*

Gorgeous...

And the poetry's not too bad either. :lol :thumbs:
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Postby WaterNymph » Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:12 am

Thanks. Its getting published!
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Postby Wolfie » Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:14 am

wow thas real great!
ЀA†H comes like £iƒε,
sometimes forced and unwanted and sometimes loved and longed for.
How will you Ði€?™
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Postby Apollo » Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:20 am

yayness and greatness!
Kings start the war... archers win the war.

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Postby WaterNymph » Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:24 am

I wrote it a long time ago
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Postby chaotic century » Sat Jan 03, 2004 6:12 pm

that was great
I am Chaotic Century King of the PointyShiney!
"this world is made of! this world is made of.. LOVE and PEACE!

neero is my master

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Postby WaterNymph » Sat Jan 03, 2004 6:14 pm

*bows*
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