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Postby Rao » Fri Jan 02, 2004 10:34 pm

Schoolyard freaks are freezing, down getting teased again
I'm looking back and down and watching it go by
Down at the stockyards cattle screaming, the trains squeak by again
I can feel my breath and I'm so thankful I'm not one of them

The sound of the ground freezing is pounding once again
It comes with the wind that once wiped off our smiles
Alarm clock bells are screaming out the same routine again
Scrape open your eyes, rise and fucking shine, 7 am

Sit down, dead weight, and wonder
Unsure, unslept, uncovered
The new light of dawn discovered by ungrateful eyes,
Through 5-3 eyes

Schoolyard freaks are freezing, pushed to the ground again
I'm looking up and west for black to fill the sky
The sound of bottles breaking still breaking in my ears
They opened just in time to empty out and gouge away the years

Sit down, dead weight, and wonder
Unsure, unslept, uncovered
The new light of dawn discovered by ungrateful eyes,
Through 5-3 eyes

Schoolyard freaks are bleeding, down getting kicked again
I can taste the earth and feel it in my eyes
The sound of cattle screaming, still screaming in my ears
They came in metal coffins -
chained me up and hacked me off my years

Sit down, dead weight, and wonder
Unsure, unslept, uncovered
The new light of dawn discovered by ungrateful eyes,
Through 5-3 eyes
Tell the Spartans, Stranger passing by,
That here, Obedient to their laws, We lie,
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Postby Rao » Sat Jan 03, 2004 8:22 pm

This is a true story too :(
Tell the Spartans, Stranger passing by,
That here, Obedient to their laws, We lie,
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Postby Wolfie » Sat Jan 03, 2004 8:24 pm

i just read it like 5 mins ago, tis good
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Postby Neerowolf » Sat Jan 03, 2004 9:32 pm

Its good poetry, but its too sad.

I don't like it, personally, but thats my opinion.
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Postby ChatOmbre » Sun Jan 04, 2004 2:33 am

yeah, it's sad, but I like it a lot.
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