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do you like it or not?

Postby Wolfie » Fri Nov 14, 2003 1:03 am

the only one thats replyed was my bff so its prolly bad....



Keen together that may be.
Friends forever it will be.
We may see each other right in front of the.
Be each other so were happy.
Walk in moonlight and sunlight maybe.
Well know each other for all eternity.
You and I forever alive, together maybe tonight.






You don’t see me even though I’m right in front of you.
I hold you tight and yet you don’t feel.
I look in your eyes and you don’t look back.
I talk to you and you don’t respond.
I start to cry you look down.

You see my eyes.
I see yours.
But I can see your heart, and that’s what I want.
That’s when I think.
How I love you.

How you think you know how I feel.
You don’t know and never will.
You look at me now and now I see.
That when you look at me.
You don’t love me.
You never will.
Until that day when you finally see I love you more than you’ll ever love me.
I know what you think I know how I know.
Its simply because I really don’t.
In till you express me.
How much you do love me.
So now that you know, know what I think I hope you’ll think…of telling me.






so howd ya like it!?
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Postby Calintz » Fri Nov 14, 2003 2:43 pm

No it's quite good actually...^^ Reminds me of one I recently did....
"L'amore è la nostra emozione più conservata. Sentirlo, saperlo, sperimentarlo. Lei non lo rammaricherà mai."

"Love is our most cherished emotion. Feel it, know it, experience it. You will never regret it."
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Postby ChatOmbre » Fri Nov 14, 2003 3:14 pm

I like it! :thumbs: but I already told you that...
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Postby Wolfie » Fri Nov 14, 2003 5:52 pm

thanks guys well guy and girl...
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Postby Neerowolf » Sat Nov 15, 2003 1:10 am

guys and girl

I liked it too. I didn't know you could make such good poetry! ^_^
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Postby Wolfie » Sat Nov 15, 2003 1:35 am

ty neero! *give neero one hug*
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Postby Neerowolf » Sat Nov 15, 2003 2:32 am

I think you should post some more often. Its very good. It has great lyrics. Whats it for?
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Postby Wolfie » Sat Nov 15, 2003 2:35 am

i was just bored...ty!
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Postby ChatOmbre » Sat Nov 15, 2003 2:40 am

you write well when you're bored! :lila
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Postby Wolfie » Sat Nov 15, 2003 2:43 am

i dont think iv ever not writen when im real bored, i guess i should get real bored more often...
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Postby Seraph » Tue Nov 18, 2003 11:14 pm

hey dont leave me out :p
i love poems, im not that good at writing them but sometimes i do have brain farts(stolen from kaos)

i think your poem is great, lots better then mine ^_^
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Postby Wolfie » Tue Nov 18, 2003 11:16 pm

thanks! :D ^_^ :)
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Postby nemele » Thu Nov 20, 2003 3:42 am

HI WOLFIE!

Nice. The first stanza's a bit confusing...some of it sounds like Yodaspeak...but for the most part I like it!
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Postby Wolfie » Thu Nov 20, 2003 3:54 pm

ty!
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Postby Neerowolf » Thu Nov 20, 2003 4:04 pm

Wow, do you two know eachother?
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