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MGS comics... my website... with comics and stuff. Its great

Postby FoolyCooly » Tue Dec 30, 2003 5:12 pm

Mgs Comics...
Its my site
http://www.angelfire.com/rock3/mgscomics

Heres one:

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Postby Neerowolf » Tue Dec 30, 2003 8:53 pm

How does the girl die? Its too confusing. Its not too bad, though.
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Postby FoolyCooly » Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:16 pm

I should have added blood or a scream or something.

Heres how they both died:
Zelda kicked ganon,
Zelda went short of a kick, fell, and died.
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Postby Neerowolf » Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:20 pm

I still don't get it. It's like shes "WHAT?" and then they both fall down and she floats up andfalls again.
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Postby FoolyCooly » Wed Dec 31, 2003 12:18 am

No, she kicks ganon with one of those karate
dropkick things. And, she says what because she is mad. :poke :lol
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Postby Neerowolf » Wed Dec 31, 2003 1:26 am

You need to draw lines that indicate velocity. That way you know shes kicking him.
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Postby FoolyCooly » Wed Dec 31, 2003 4:22 pm

Ok, i'll do that the next time. Thanks for
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